10 October 2007

Back to you!!

I get up in the morning and the first thing i do is to call you..
we speak sometimes and sometimes we don't.
But after both the deals i am left thinking of you.
If i speak to you,i am over the moon..
and if i don't i am left engulfed by thought --where are you??

I do my daily chores and along with them try to call you too.
I try to divert my mind and concentrate on the thing i must do..
But my mind is powerless and it goes back to you!

Why don't you understand honey i got to talk to you..
..or else i will be vile to the stuff i got to do.
I know you got some genuine reasons and i must understand.
I think,i got to control my mind so that i can complete things in time..
because after all the weakness is mine!!

I compose my mind and hold my thoughts together,
trying to achieve what i want.
I pledge not to call you until i am done..
but after few minutes,i am again sitting with the phone!
As my mind is powerless and it went back to you!!

7 comments:

Dhandal said...

Back to Back 2 wonderful poems...a good start must say!! keep the race on ;)
now i know why ur phone bill comes so hig n u switched to relience....chori pakdi gayi!! haha...

simply me! said...

thanks! and will try to continue..and about the reliance..my parents forced me into it!

Abha said...

sometimes its wiser to let your powerless mind win. ;) it saves a hell lotta time!!

Anonymous said...

have started readin ur blogs too....
good poems to start with...r these original??

simply me! said...

yup they are original,anand!

sid! said...

Thats one of the loveliest poems i have ever gotta read..both of them actually!!!

Anonymous said...

The first thing that strikes me about them is the honesty about your posts.Not necessarily pertaining to the content, but the writing style is so true,original.Its not like u are just puttin some words to paper just for the sake of makin a poem.loved it re.its definitely not some arbitratry lallu stuff ok :P keep writing yaar...